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Subject: Way off Topic Thu Oct 02, 2008 3:38 pm

I need votes for my poem, it'll help me win... LOL here's the link. Vote for what you think and how you feel about it. (not asking everyone to give me 10s LOL)

http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?PID=13143529
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Subject: Re: Way off Topic Thu Oct 02, 2008 10:43 pm

Very nice Poem !! Yes, I had to give it a 10 ! I use to write poetry alot. Had a few 1st prize winners but that was when I was in school.
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Subject: reply Thu Oct 02, 2008 10:50 pm

A point of view from the outside looking in.......
I gave the poem a 10, reason being~ the poem gave a alternate route to the writters state of mind. It also contained comments that make the reader wonder.......All good stuff when writting a poem. If asked what i thaught of this poem, i would say its clear, at the same time its lashing and blunt, and that i give it a 10,

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Subject: Re: Way off Topic Thu Oct 02, 2008 11:11 pm

I gave it a "10" as well. The wording is fantastic, it definitely gets to the heart of the reader, and I think it would make a good song to the right music. Smile

Great work! I hope you win.

It made me think about things that had happened to me in the past and things I worry about in the future.

Subject: Re: Way off Topic Fri Oct 03, 2008 12:52 am

Thank you guys... Feel free to pass the link on if you want, the more votes the better.

I will tell you I was very angry and upset when I first wrote it as a blog of "Scattered" thoughts. It's now being published in two separate books. Which is prize enough, but I'm greedy. I want a cash prize too. LOL
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